“…this year in honors English I learned how to write an essay much better and more efficiently with the help of Mr. Viskanta. All the paragraph outline worksheets helped me a lot. I used to not really know in what order to put my sentences; sometimes I didn’t even know how or what to write what I wanted to say. The outlines helped me to guide me in the right direction to a better essay and/or paragraph.”1
Student Business Letter
Project Overview
Before adopting the Common Core State Standards, California had what a Fordham Institute study called “standards clearly superior to those of the Common Core” (Carmichael et. al., 2010, n.p.). The California English Language Arts Content Standards included writing business letters:
2.0 Writing Applications (Genres and Their Characteristics)
2.5 Write business letters:
- Provide clear and purposeful information and address the intended audience appropriately.
- Use appropriate vocabulary, tone, and style to take into account the nature of the relationship with, and the knowledge and interests of, the recipients.
- Highlight central ideas or images.
- Follow a conventional style with page formats, fonts, and spacing that contribute to the documents’ readability and impact. (California Department of Education, 1998, p. 61).
Studying the novel What is the What by Dave Eggers, which narrated the journey of Sudanese refugee Valentino Achak Deng, was a real-world opportunity for students to communicate with someone whose life they became intimately familiar with. The students were told that the letters would be sent to Mr. Deng further enriching the real-world value of the assignment.
In addition to connecting the assignment to a real-world opportunity, it allowed students to personalize the relevance of the text to their lived experiences. For example, several students wrote about their Armenian heritage and the common experiences that inform the history of both cultures. Another student writes about his experiences as a young African-American.
Significantly, the assignment also integrates Social Justice Standards developed by the Learning for Justice program (formerly Teaching Tolerance) at the Southern Poverty Law Center. The Social Justice Standards have four domains; identity, diversity, justice and action (Teaching Tolerance at The Southern Poverty Law Center, 2018, p. 3). The domains were created using the work of Louise Derman-Sparks, known for their anti-bias work such as the book Anti-Bias Education for Young Children and Ourselves. Anchor standards that the assignment addresses include:
- Students will express pride, confidence and healthy self-esteem without denying the value and dignity of other people. (Identity)
- Students will develop language and knowledge to accurately and respectfully describe how people (including themselves) are both similar to and different from each other and others in their identity groups. (Diversity)
- Students will respectfully express curiosity about the history and lived experiences of others and will exchange ideas and beliefs in an open-minded way. (Diversity)
- Students will respond to diversity by building empathy, respect, understanding and connection. (Diversity)
- Students will examine diversity in social, cultural, political and historical contexts rather than in ways that are superficial or oversimplified. (Diversity)
- Students will analyze the harmful impact of bias and injustice on the world, historically and today. (Justice)
- Students will speak up with courage and respect when they or someone else has been hurt or wronged by bias. (Action) (Teaching Tolerance at The Southern Poverty Law Center, 2018, p. 3)
California Department of Education. (1998). English-Language Arts Content Standards for California Public Schools: Kindergarten through grade twelve. https://www.cde.ca.gov/be/st/ss/documents/elacontentstnds.pdf
Carmichael, S. B., Wilson, W. S., Porter-Magee, K., & Martino, G. (2010). The State of State Standards–and the Common Core–in 2010. Thomas B. Fordham Institute. https://fordhaminstitute.org/national/research/state-state-standards-and-common-core-2010
Teaching Tolerance at The Southern Poverty Law Center. (2018). Social justice standards: The Learning for Justice Anti-Bias Framework. https://www.learningforjustice.org/frameworks/social-justice-standards
Testimonials
“I have learned that what we learn in English happens in every day life. During the time we were reading 1984, the conspiracy of Edward Snowden was happening and even a couple weeks ago, with the injustice of Donald Sterling while reading To Kill a Mockingbird. Many things have influenced the way we learn English.”1
RA 2014
“…I’ve really tried to make my writing more than just the assignment. I enhanced it with variations of sentence structure and word choice. I think the Kreuger Park paper was a turning point for me this year. … This assignment helped me to create realistic descriptions and setting. … I know there is still room for me to improve in my writing, but I feel that I made major strides this school year. … Overall, this class helped me to acquire skills in English that I didn’t learn earlier on in school. I feel better prepared to take AP Literature next year. Thank you.”1
GI
“My experience in English class this year has been unforgettable. I will always remember the novel “Tortilla Curtain” for I enjoyed reading it the most out of all the books this year. Also, I had a pleasure being involved in our classroom discussions and contributing different ideas on the board especially for “Life of Pi.” Overall, I enjoyed Honors English and I am looking forward to AP Literature next year.”1
SJ 2014
“Writing different prompts, at least once a week, has helped me improve my writing skills and also made me a better writer. Reading the book “Tortilla Curtain”* by T.C Boyle; helped me with the concept and the use of compare and contrast which benefitted me to have a better understanding of the book.”1
ES 2014
“My honors English class has taught me to flourish immensely as a writer. … I gained confidence in the way I was writing. I learned how to successfully analyze a book as well as a short story to great depths. Writing and analyzing a piece of work weather it is a poem or an article has become second nature to me. I was taught that a story may not only have one main idea or purpose, but in fact have several.”1
MK 2014
“…I’m most proud of learning how to use details and sensory language in my writing. The prompts I wrote in class every Monday allowed me to expand my imagination and include the detail my writing needed in order to improve. … I used to keep everything nice and simple but from this class I have learned that detail is very important in writing. … This year has been very fun and I’m looking forward for your AP Literature class next year.”1